Excellent idea for the story. Great character development. However, there was very little tension and conflict. The minute she brought some conflict in, like the other man, she created a situation that brought the hot dragon man back into her bedroom or elevator in this case. Thus, there was no wondering - will the get back together? It was obvious from the start they were meant to be, and she made sure that they stayed. A scene or two more with the other guy where are the dragon man’s relationship with her was really threatened would’ve made a difference. And the dragon councils out-of-date rules were never a threat, and once again, she made sure that problem was solved way too easily. For those who want a story with happily ever guaranteed from the start, and throughout you won’t be disappointed. But for those who want a story with tension and conflict, you will be disappointed.
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